22A - Elevator Pitch
Feedback: I received feedback on the speed at which I gave the pitch. People liked that it did not seem rushed, so I did not change this aspect of my pitch.
Reflection: I changed a lot about this pitch. I reworded my original script to make the sentences flow. I stood up and used more body language. I also used a light to improve video quality. I believe I am more confident with this pitch, but there is always room for improvement.
ReplyDeleteI definitely loved the change of scenery and felt like you’ve really fine tuned your message. You know you audience and are speaking directly about them. I think you really understand you selling points and how to promote them. Your understanding and experience with the science aspect of the problem is also really valuable. This hows your audience of your target market.
Hey Ashley,
ReplyDeleteI like how you kept the speed the same in this pitch from before because I think that is something that is difficult to do while talking to a big audience. I also thought you articulated your points well and your message came across nice and clear. I also think the body language and enthusiasm you used helps add the quality of the overall pitch.
Hey Ashley,
ReplyDeleteWhile it's very important to edit your work based off of negative feedback, it's also just as important to reinforce your work where positive feedback is given, which is something you've definitely done. regarding your reflection, it's great to see that the feedback given to you has helped you to better your pitch. While it may seem underrated, good lighting is quite important for a good video (especially a sales pitch).